Progress, a Little More

Okay, the first two parts of the book are done, second-pass wise. There will need to be a third pass (at least) to sand down the accreted gunk and make sure that each sentence means what I think it means. But first, section three, which is the least, um, cohesive, has to be beaten into submission.

All this is rendered more complex by the fact that I need to split the POV throughout Part III. Which is going to mean recasting some of the already-written chapters, and thinking more about the whole segment. It will be the better for it, but it's a little daunting. Thank heaven Avocado goes off to the east on Friday night. Gonna be a whole lot of writin' goin on.